Wednesday, 16 March 2011

Improved Script


In the school

Long SHOT

Geeky girl walking through corridor carrying books.

Straight cut

Close up shot

Mary

(Narration) Ok, that’s me over there, living and surviving the reality of a harsh planet, we all call “School.”

Straight cut

Medium shot

Where we are all fed from a golden fountain of knowledge. Yeah right! School is just a place where a jedi like myself cannot be with a guy like that leaving us to fight the most important battle in the world, loving someone who will never love you back.

Straight cut

Long shot


Straight cut

Medium shot

Maybe I am going a bit overboard or maybe I am not, but anyway my name is Mary Watkins and yes if you have’nt already guessed that I am utterly in love with scott… scott williams.
Straight cut

Close up shot

(Standing in a striking pose) Scott Williams is seen talking on the phone

Long shot

Straight cut

Mary is seen staring at Scott

Oliver walks down corridor and interrupts Mary day dreaming

Earth calling Mary, Earth to Mary, is it safe to land yet?

MARY

Do you come in peace and carry Scott Williams?

OlLIVER

I come with love and M&Ms will that do?

MARY

I guess it would be rude to say no.

Both characters laugh, Mary snorts.

Mary

OLIVER

Anyway, I’ll see you in science, Feel the force

Oliver holds up his hand

MARY

Feel the force

Mary holds up her hand

Close up shot

Both characters high five

Male voice

Shouts: heads up

Camera tilts to ceiling

Mary is seen looking up to the ceiling

Camera crane

High angle point of view shot

Mary falls to the ground

STRAIGHT CUT

CLOSE UP SHOT OF MARY ON THE GROUND

Low angle point of view show

Close up shot

Reaches out to Mary's hand

Camera zooms out

Medium shot

Let me help you up.

Beat

Straight cut

Medium low angle point of view shot


EXTREME CLOSE UP SHOT
low angle point of view shot of Mary

Long shot of Scott walking away

Straight cut
Medium shot of Mary

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